Wednesday, 2 December 2020

elf Day 12

Today that stupid elf has got us a snowman but it melted what did he expect? It's too hot. But luckily for you I know that on day 13 he is going to be laying in a ball pit that says 'Elfs only' he goes to school but doesn't know his grammar it's supposed to be elves only.


4 comments:

  1. Hi its me Souta I went to basketball with you and I have a question when did he go get a snow man?And does a song go when you can't find him because when I went to your class and we could not find him so a song started and he was in a tree so...yeah creepy.I really like how you took the photo it perfect you can see the words.Next time you could say what the club was like.Good job!!!

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  2. That's a little disturbing... Hi Shae it's me Caius. It's grammar isn't any good. I like the detail in your text for this post. but next time could you add a bit more? Ka Rawe!

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  3. Hi, It's Kyana. I like how you gave us some information about day 13. Maybe next time you could do a close-up photo of what was in the container. Good job, Shae!

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  4. Hi, it's me Zeke. I like the detail that you used. When did he get the snowman? Good Job!

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